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You received a letter from your friend informing you that his elderly parents are coming to visit in your area and he is asking for your advice on

You received a letter from your friend informing you that his elderly parents are coming to visit in your area and he is asking for your advice on MOO9
Dear salman, It was a really pleasant surprise to receive your letter after such a long time. I am happy to know that your elderly parents are coming to visit Sylhet in Bangladesh. It is very nice to know that in your country even the retired people are so fond to tourism. There is a lot to see in Bangladesh. I would suggest they visit the Tea Garden, King Bridge, Lala Khal, Jaflong, Madobkundo and many more places in this area. If you send me their itinerary, I could plan their time here nicely. As far as stay in concerned, there are many good hotels of government which are very reasonably priced and good but they have booked to be well in advance. However, it would be my great pleasure if they stay with me in my house. I would take great care of them and also show them around. My parents join me in inviting them to stay with us. We shall also enjoy holidaying with them. Hoping to see your parents soon. Yours lovingly, Saiful
Dear
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salman
, It was a
really
pleasant surprise to receive your letter after such a long time. I am happy to know that your elderly parents are coming to visit
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Sylhet
in Bangladesh. It is
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very
nice to know that in your country even the retired
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people
are
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so
fond to tourism. There is a lot to
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see
in Bangladesh. I would suggest they visit the Tea Garden, King Bridge,
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Lala
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Khal
,
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Jaflong
,
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Madobkundo
and
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many
more places in this area. If you
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send
me their itinerary, I could plan their time here
nicely
. As far as stay in concerned, there are
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many
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good
hotels of
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government
which are
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very
reasonably
priced and
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good
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but
they have booked to be well in advance.
However
, it would be my great pleasure if they stay with me in my
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house
. I would take great care of them and
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
them around. My parents
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join
me in inviting them to stay with us. We shall
also
enjoy holidaying with them. Hoping to
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see
your parents
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soon
. Yours
lovingly
,
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Saiful
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IELTS letter You received a letter from your friend informing you that his elderly parents are coming to visit in your area and he is asking for your advice on

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  American English
1 paragraphs
176 words
5.5
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