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would publish my viewpoints in your college magazine

would publish my viewpoints in your college magazine 5XdV

Dear Mr Blunt, As one of your frequent customers, I am writing to recommend some of my ideas in order that you could enhance the quality of your cafeteria in the college. I am hoping that you would publish my viewpoints in your college magazine. Firstly, I would like to express my appreciation to the staff and the management. I have been enjoying this café since the time I started to study here and I have always liked its mesmerizing location, hygiene and ventilation, to name but a few, since then. Unfortunately, many students, including me, are not satisfied with the menu. Although it offers some international cuisine, it is not varied regarding nourishing meals. Most of the canteen foods are not organic and have high amounts of food additives. What is more, the charges are considerably high and some snacks are overpriced. As a student who has a genuine liking for your cafeteria, I would like to suggest that you consider including some healthy meals. In terms of the charges, the café can offer a set menu with reasonable prices. Thank you for taking my advices into consideration. Yours sincerely,

Dear Mr Blunt,

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 students, including me, are not satisfied with the menu. Although it offers This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
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 healthy meals. In terms of the charges, the café can offer a set menu with reasonable prices.

Thank you for taking my advices into consideration.

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