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Your neighbours have a dog that is noisy at night. You can’t sleep. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: – describe the problem with the dog – explain why it is important for you to sleep – outline what your neighbours could do about the situation.

Your neighbours have a dog that is noisy at night. You can’t sleep. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: – describe the problem with the dog – explain why it is important for you to sleep – outline what your neighbours could do about the situation. VBylm
Iam writing this letter to bring your attention about a complaint that iam facing from your dog. As you may know, your dog has been roaming around the neighbourhood barking all night disturbing everones sleep, and is seen digging holes in the gardens. Because of this, i have been woken from my sleep seceral times at night. Now iam consulting a Doctor and iam taking pills at night to get sleep. Since Iam having my university exams on next week, i have alot to study before my exams. For that i need to take good rest at night, then only i will be able to concentrate well on my studies. So, it would be grateful, if you cound take your dog to any of your relatives house for a week. If it wasn't for my exams, i would never have asked you to do this. I hope you could understand my situation. Looking forward to hearing from you yours faithfullyABC
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writing this letter to bring your attention about a complaint that
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facing from your dog.

As you may know, your dog has been roaming around the
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neighbourhood
barking all
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night
disturbing
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everones
sleep, and is
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seen
digging holes in the gardens.
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,
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i
have
been woken
from my sleep
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seceral
times at
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night
.
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Now
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iam
consulting a Doctor and
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iam
taking pills at
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night
to
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get
sleep.

Since
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Iam
having my university exams on
next
week,
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i
have
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alot
to study
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before
my exams. For that
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i
need to take
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good
rest at
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night
, then
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only
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i
will be able to concentrate well on my studies.

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, it would be grateful, if you
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cound
take your dog to any of your relatives
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house
for a week. If it wasn't for my exams,
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would never have asked you to do this. I hope you could understand my situation.

Looking forward to hearing from you

yours
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faithfullyABC

IELTS letter Your neighbours have a dog that is noisy at night. You can’t sleep. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: – describe the problem with the dog – explain why it is important for you to sleep – outline what your neighbours could do about the situation.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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