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your local hospital jas a advertised for peopleto do unpaid work helping at tbe hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. write a letter to the hopspital. in your letter explain why you would like to do unpaid work at tbe hospital. say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do. give details of when you would be available for this work.

your local hospital jas a advertised for peopleto do unpaid work helping at tbe hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. write a letter to the hopspital. in your letter explain why you would like to do unpaid work at tbe hospital. say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do. give details of when you would be available for this work. g5AbA
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest for working at your hospital. I hope that there was still available slot. I offer myself to work unpaid. Im am willing to gave a hand for in need. I am am graduated as a nursing. Although I am under board I have the experience when it comes to taking care of the ill patients. I am glad if ever I would have the chance to share my skills to help assist nurses and other members in the hospital when it comes for taking the blood pressure, checking the temperature of the patients and giving tepid sponge bath. Thus, I want to make use of my spare time for helping the people in need. I love taking care of elderly as well as children. I am always available like 5 in the afternoon onwards. I am hoping and patiently waiting for your response. Respectfully yours, Jill
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest for working at your hospital. I hope that there was
still
available slot. I offer myself to work unpaid.
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Im
Did you mean "am I"?
am
willing
Did you mean "to give"?
to gave
a hand for in need. I am
am graduated
as a nursing. Although I am under board I have the experience when it
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comes
to taking care of the ill patients. I am glad if ever I would have the chance to share my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
to
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help
assist nurses and other members in the hospital when it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
for taking the blood pressure, checking the temperature of the patients and giving tepid sponge bath.
Thus
, I want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of my spare time for helping the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
in need. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
taking care of elderly
as well
as children. I am always available like 5 in the afternoon onwards.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am hoping and
patiently
waiting for your response.
Respectfully
yours,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Jill
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IELTS letter your local hospital jas a advertised for peopleto do unpaid work helping at tbe hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. write a letter to the hopspital. in your letter explain why you would like to do unpaid work at tbe hospital. say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do. give details of when you would be available for this work.

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