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You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English-speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take Write at least 150 words.

You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English-speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take RNwwG
Dear Ms Saradha, Hope you are doing great. I am a new tenant in your apartment 106-C, writing in connection with the defective condition of some of the furniture in my apartment. I am hoping that you would arrange to replace them soon. In relation to the specifics of the faulty furniture, the legs of the dining table are uneven and it makes the table unusable. Besides, two chairs are missing. On top of that, the sofa set in the living room is old and substandard. It needs to be replaced immediately. While I signed the rental contract, you assured me to have these pieces of furniture replaced. Two months have already elapsed but nothing has been done. Imagine how awful it is that we can not enjoy our dinner together and cannot seat in the living room! It would be highly appreciated if you could kindly find a replacement for this furniture soon and make our living comfortable. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Priya Nivetha
Dear Ms
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Saradha
,

Hope you are doing great. I am a new tenant in your apartment 106-C, writing in connection with the defective condition of
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some of the
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furniture
in my apartment. I am hoping that you would arrange to replace them
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soon
.

In relation to the specifics of the faulty
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
furniture
, the legs of the dining table are uneven and it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
the table unusable.
Besides
, two chairs are missing.
On top of that
, the sofa set in the living room is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
and substandard. It needs to
be replaced
immediately.

While I signed the rental contract, you assured me to have these pieces of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
furniture
replaced. Two months have already elapsed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
nothing has
been done
. Imagine how awful it is that we can not enjoy our dinner together and cannot seat in the living room!

It would be
highly
appreciated if you could kindly find a replacement for this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
furniture
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
our living comfortable.

I am looking forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

Priya
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Nivetha
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IELTS letter You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English-speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

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  American English
8 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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