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You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to take time give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away Dear Ms Snyder I am Navneet Kaur, working as an engineer technologist in your company and writing this letter with regards to request for leave sanction as I want to on a holiday trip with my friends. We plan to visit Shimla . I am totally exhausted from my daily life routine and break from work is my extremely indispensable for me. Due to pandemic, there is lockdown last year so, I am unable to go out of station since from long time. My mind is totally disturbed and frustrated. Henceforth , I can’t even focus on my work with full determination. It will be 3 days and 2 night holiday package, me and my friends hired a car. We will start our journey on April 12, 2021 at sharp 5:00 am and enjo

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to take time give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away Dear Ms Snyder I am Navneet Kaur, working as an engineer technologist in your company and writing this letter with regards to request for leave sanction as I want to on a holiday trip with my friends. We plan to visit Shimla. I am totally exhausted from my daily life routine and break from work is my extremely indispensable for me. Due to pandemic, there is lockdown last year so, I am unable to go out of station since from long time. My mind is totally disturbed and frustrated. Henceforth, I can’t even focus on my work with full determination. It will be 3 days and 2 night holiday package, me and my friends hired a car. We will start our journey on April 12, 2021 at sharp 5: 00 am and enjoy the beautiful city Shimla for 2 nights. Then, we will returned to home town on April 14, 2020. Thereby, I need 3 days off work from April 12, 2021 to April 14, 2021. I am trying to put some extra efforts by doing double shift to meet my deadlines, but that’s not enough. As there is a lot of work to do. But, . I assure you I will complete my pending work by working for extra hours. I look forward for your early reply. Yours sincerely, Navneet Kaur

You are working for a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. You need to take This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time off You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 why you want to take time

give This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 of the amount of time you need

suggest how your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 could be covered
 while you are away

Dear Ms Snyder

I am Possible spelling mistake found.Naveen
Navneet
Possible spelling mistake found.AUR
Kaur
, working as an engineer technologist in your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 and writing this letter Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".in regard towith regard toregarding
with regards to
 request for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 sanction as I want to on a holiday trip with my friends. We plan to visit Possible spelling mistake found.Shim la
Shimla
.

I am totally
 exhausted from my daily life routine and break from You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 is my extremely
 indispensable for me. Due to pandemic, there is lockdown last year This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, I am unable to go out of station since from long time. My mind is totally
 disturbed and frustrated. Henceforth, I can’t even focus on my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 with full determination.

It will be 3 days and 2 night holiday package, me and my friends hired a car. We will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 our journey on April 12, Some style guides suggest that commas should set off the year in a month-day-year date: "2021,".2021,
2021
 at sharp 5: 00 am and enjoy the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 city Possible spelling mistake found.Shim la
Shimla
 for 2 nights. Then, we will The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "return"return
returned
 to home town on April 14, 2020. Thereby, I need 3 days off You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 from April 12, Some style guides suggest that commas should set off the year in a month-day-year date: "2021,".2021,
2021
 to April 14, 2021.

I am trying to put This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 extra efforts by doing double shift to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 my deadlines, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 that’s not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 there is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 to do. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
Did you just mean "," or "."?,.
, .
 I assure you I will complete my pending You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 by working for extra hours.

I look forward for your early reply.

Yours sincerely
,

Possible spelling mistake found.Naveen
Navneet
Possible spelling mistake found.AUR
Kaur