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you have decided to leave your current job even though you enjoy it

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing to inform you that I will be resigning from my employment as my contract is being over in next month. I want to explore my experience and knowledge in a new work culture now so I decided to quit at the end of the date of my contract of employment. I have learnt a lot in the last three years as this was my first job with an automobile company so I have experienced valuable work culture and explored myself into the field of marketing strategies and plannings. My team was really helpful and generous towards me. I have applied to two companies for my next future goals and employment. i would like to request you if you can provide me with a letter of reference. I await your prompt response. Yours faithfullyManisha

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 would like to request you if you can provide me with a letter of reference. I await your prompt response. Yours Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphfaithfullyManisha.faithfullyManisha!faithfullyManisha?faithfullyManisha:faithfullyManisha,faithfullyManisha;
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IELTS letter you have decided to leave your current job even though you enjoy it

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

138 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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