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you have decided to leave your current job even though you enjoy it

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing to inform you that I will be resigning from my employment as my contract is being over in next month. I want to explore my experience and knowledge in a new work culture now so I decided to quit at the end of the date of my contract of employment. I have learnt a lot in the last three years as this was my first job with an automobile company so I have experienced valuable work culture and explored myself into the field of marketing strategies and plannings. My team was really helpful and generous towards me. I have applied to two companies for my next future goals and employment. i would like to request you if you can provide me with a letter of reference. I await your prompt response. Yours faithfullyManisha
Dear Mr Smith, I am writing to inform you that I will be resigning from my employment as my contract is being over in
next
month. I want to explore my experience and knowledge in a new work culture
now
so
I decided to quit at the
end
of the date of my contract of employment. I have
learnt
a lot in the last three years as this was my
first
job with an automobile
company
so
I have experienced valuable work culture and explored myself into the field of marketing strategies and plannings. My team was
really
helpful and generous towards me. I have applied to two
companies
for my
next
future goals and employment.
i
would like to request you if you can provide me with a letter of reference. I await your prompt response. Yours
faithfullyManisha
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IELTS letter you have decided to leave your current job even though you enjoy it

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  American English
1 paragraphs
138 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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