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You have seen an advertisement in a newspaper for a job in the city post office during your holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the post office. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job

You have seen an advertisement in a newspaper for a job in the city post office during your holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the post office. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job BJ7wa
Dear Sir, My name is Ala, I'm writing to you concerning a part-time job in your post office. At present, I'm studying for the second year in a computer science course and by the end of next month, my summer holidays will start. So I'm looking for a job to utilize my semester holidays. During my last semester holidays, I worked for the postal department which is located in Capetown. There I worked in allotment of deliveries and scheduling the slots for workers. In addition, I have computer knowledge in operating the system. At the end of my course, I have planned to do a thesis related to the function of the postal department as the system works in this department. Therefore, I'm quite attracted to work in postal thus it also pays me the knowledge to complete my course successfully. I look forward to hearing from you. Your's sincerly, Ala
Dear Sir, My name is Ala, I'm writing to you concerning a part-time job in your post office. At present, I'm studying for the second year in a computer science course and by the
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I'm looking for a job to utilize my semester holidays.

During my last semester holidays, I worked for the postal department which
is located
in Capetown. There I worked in allotment of deliveries and scheduling the slots for workers.
In addition
, I have computer knowledge in operating the system.

At the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of my course, I have planned to do a thesis related to the function of the postal department as the system works in this department.
Therefore
, I'm quite attracted to work in postal
thus
it
also
pays me the knowledge to complete my course
successfully
.

I look forward to hearing from you.

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sincerly
, Ala
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement in a newspaper for a job in the city post office during your holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the post office. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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