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Your neighbour's children keep spoling your garden write a letter of complaint to the neighbour tell him the cause of your complaint what damage the children cause to your garden.

Your neighbour's children keep spoling your garden write a letter of complaint to the neighbour tell him the cause of your complaint what damage the children cause to your garden. WGDy0
Dear Mr. j, It really painful things for me to complaint about your child as you know, children of street has play in my garden every although I gave permission to them for play as well as your kid also involved with them on the contrary now they are not only falling the mess in park while they also has been broking My flower pot also any I would discuss my whole problem in thus letter. However, I do not want tall the about it on the contrary they are not stopping to spoil my garden that why I decided it important to tell about you they do not only plucking the raw fruits on the trees but also they plucking the flowers moreover last day they had gain to my broken flower pots also infact it was quite expensive consequently that is main reason to tell the complaint to you about it is really big problem as well as they are not understanding this as a I told to them many times on country they do repeat same thing again day. I do not stop to children to play in my garden as a I know in own street do not other places for play games to children but please give the insertion to children about it as know to keep maintain the beauty of garden is so difficult. I hope you will definitely understand my obstacle. I look forward to hearing from your answer. Regart. Your sincerely,
Dear Mr. j,

It seems that a verb is missing after "It". Please verify.
It
really
painful things for me to complaint about your child as you know,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
children
of street has
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
play
in my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
garden
every although I gave permission to them for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
play
as well
as your kid
also
involved with them
on the contrary
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now
they are not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
falling the mess in park while they
also
The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "have", "haven"
has
been
Possible spelling mistake found.
broking
My flower pot
also
any I would discuss my whole problem in
thus
letter.

However
, I do not want tall the about it
on the contrary
they are not stopping to spoil my
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garden
that why I decided it
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important
to
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tell
about
Consider adding a comma here.
you
they do not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
After the auxiliary verb 'do', use the base form of a verb. Did you mean "pluck"?
plucking
the raw fruits on the trees
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
Did you mean "they're plucking", "they are plucking", or "they were plucking"?
they plucking
the flowers
moreover
last day they had gain to my broken flower pots
also
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infact
it was quite expensive
consequently
that is
main reason to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
the complaint to you about it is
really
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big
problem
as well
as they
The verb 'understanding' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
are not understanding
this as
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a I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
The verb 'to tell someone' does not require a preposition.
to them
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many
times on country they do repeat same thing again day.

I do not
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stop
to
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children
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
play
in my
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garden
as
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a I
know in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
street do not other places for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
play
games to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
children
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but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
give the insertion to
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children
about it as know to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
maintain the beauty of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
garden
is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
difficult.

I hope you will definitely understand my obstacle.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
look forward to hearing from your answer.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Regart
.
Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
sincerely
,

IELTS letter Your neighbour's children keep spoling your garden write a letter of complaint to the neighbour tell him the cause of your complaint what damage the children cause to your garden.

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249 words
5.0
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