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Talk about your future plan

Talk about your future plan kjELM
Hello, my name is Quốc Huy and today I’ll tell you about my future plan. As you know, the world is gradually being linked together for mutual development, so the exchange between countries in many aspects such as culture, economy, technology, . . . no longer becomes a strange thing. Therefore, I have a great ambition that I can travel abroad and bring the unique things of Vietnam to promote to the whole world. However, I temporarily put that aside because there is still a prerequisite: Overcoming the language barrier. English is an important language that enables me to communicate in almost every country in the world so my main purpose now is to get at least a 6. 5 IELTS score. I’m just an English language freshman at a college so my way to accomplish my own mission is still long and hard but I have got a well-prepared list of things to do. Every day, I woke up at 5 AM to practice listening to English. I may listen to songs which lyrics are written in English or some speaking test recorded from IELTS exams. It’s very effective because this is the time when human memory works best. I can remember the pronunciation of vocabulary and repeat it very clearly. Also, I may find some idioms or phrases
Hello, my name is
Quốc
Huy
and
today
I’ll
tell
you about my future plan. As you know, the world is
gradually
being linked
together for mutual development,
so
the exchange between countries in
many
aspects such as culture, economy, technology
, .
.
.
no
longer becomes a strange thing.
Therefore
, I have a great ambition that I can travel abroad and bring the unique things of Vietnam to promote to the whole world.
However
, I
temporarily
put that aside
because
there is
still
a prerequisite: Overcoming the language barrier. English is an
important
language that enables me to communicate in almost every country in the world
so
my main purpose
now
is to
get
at least a 6. 5 IELTS score. I’m
just
an English language freshman at a college
so
my way to accomplish my
own
mission is
still
long and
hard
but
I have
got
a well-prepared list of things to do. Every day, I woke up at 5 AM to practice listening to English. I may listen to songs which lyrics
are written
in English or
some
speaking
test
recorded from IELTS exams. It’s
very
effective
because
this is the time when human memory works best. I can remember the pronunciation of vocabulary and repeat it
very
clearly
.
Also
, I may find
some
idioms or phrases
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IELTS letter Talk about your future plan

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
219 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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