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You recently took a trip. In your absence, a friend did you a big favour. Write a letter thanking them. In your letter include:

You recently took a trip. In your absence, a friend did you a big favour. Write a letter thanking them. In your letter include: lx1Xw
Dear Peter, I want to let you know just how much I appreciate your looking after Jane during my trip to India. I am not sure how much you realise you have helped me. As I have told you before, this past year has been very difficult for me. Being a single parent, it is particularly challenging trying to juggle a demanding career with a child in need of supervision. When I received notice that i would need to take a professional trip to our Indian headquarters, I wasn't sure who I could ask to look after my daughter. You thankfully came for my rescue! Jane expressed how much she enjoyed her time with you, too. You don't know how much it pleased me to return to a happy child. Please let me know if there is some way I can repay you for the kindness you have offered me. Your act of generosity has made such an impression. Thanking you again
Dear Peter,

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challenging trying to juggle a demanding career with a child in need of supervision. When I received notice that
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would need to take a professional trip to our Indian headquarters, I wasn't sure who I could ask to look after my daughter. You
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came for my rescue! Jane expressed how
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she enjoyed her time with you, too. You don't know how
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way I can repay you for the kindness you have offered me. Your act of generosity has made such an impression.

Thanking you again
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IELTS letter You recently took a trip. In your absence, a friend did you a big favour. Write a letter thanking them. In your letter include:

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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