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Write a letter to your friend to tell about your future job

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Dear Laura, I am truly glad to hear that you and your family are doing well. And today, I am writing to share something about the job that I choose for my future. Well, as I am recently a freshman of Hospitality Management, so hopefully I can become a hotel manager after graduating. A hotelier could be a person whose job generally is managing and coordinating all the activities to run a hotel. I truly like this job because I can apply many skills that I learnt at college such as communication and so on. Furthermore, this job totally suits my interest, since I have a deeply passion for the service sector. In my opinion, there are many factors that impact on choosing a appropriate job for ourselves. Like, our passion is the first thing to think about when we start to choose a job. The second factor is salary. People need a job for a living so the salary is definitely needed. And the last but not least, is the environment. A job with a friendly environment, supportive and social butterfly colleagues will attract more people than any other job. Fortunately, the unemployment rate in my area is quite low and everyone has a stable job and a prosperous life. That is all for me. And what about you Laura? Do you have any views to share with me? I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Quynh Anh.

Dear Laura,

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Best regards,

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