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Your neighbourhood is having a problem with garbage. Write a letter to the environment officer in your area. In your letter-

Your neighbourhood is having a problem with garbage. Write a letter to the environment officer in your area. In your letter- EN7nM
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to bring your kind attention to the garbage which has accumulated in my neighborhood and request you to do something tangible about it at the earliest. The matter stands thus, the sweepers, appointed by the municipal committee have gone on strike. As a result, the rubbish from households has not been lifted for the last six days. This has led to piling up of garbage at many places in the street. The major problem, we are confronting is the foul smell emanating from these garbage heaps. On the top of it, mosquitoes and flies are prospering by leaps and bounds. If steps are not taken, many health hazards may erupt. Please look into the matter with utmost urgency. Whatever needs to be done to satisfy the workers, please do it so they can get back to work soon. If it is not in the realm of possibility, you are requested to appoint some temporary workers to clean the street. The sooner you take an action, the better it will be. Looking forward to a swift compliance from you in this matter. Yours faithfully,
Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to bring your kind attention to the garbage which has accumulated in my neighborhood and request you to do something tangible about it at the earliest.

The matter stands
thus
, the sweepers, appointed by the municipal committee have gone on strike.
As a result
, the rubbish from households has not
been lifted
for the last six days. This has led to piling up of garbage at
many
places in the street.

The major problem, we are confronting is the foul smell emanating from these garbage heaps. On the top of it, mosquitoes and flies are prospering by leaps and bounds. If steps are not taken,
many
health hazards may erupt.

Please
look into the matter with utmost urgency. Whatever needs to
be done
to satisfy the workers,
please
do it
so
they can
get
back to work
soon
. If it is not in the realm of possibility, you
are requested
to appoint
some
temporary workers to clean the street. The sooner you take an action, the better it will be.

Looking forward to a swift compliance from you in this matter.

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter Your neighbourhood is having a problem with garbage. Write a letter to the environment officer in your area. In your letter-

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
190 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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