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Letter to friend to decline the invitation

Letter to friend to decline the invitation NMlrj

Dear Jay, I have received letter and I am so happy that you have invited me to over London(UK) to spend summer with you and your family. This is a very delighted offer and I would love to come. As I heard summer is best time to visit London as weather is very clear and awesome. Unfortunately I have my final exams in the next month and preparation is still half way. I would like to come but this is a very important exam for my masters degree and couldn’t reschedule. I would like to visit you and your family in spring season and I heard a lot of good things to see and spend days in UK. I will check ticket availability and plan in advance. I hope your schedule will also clear and if any change or other plan you already have, please inform me. Thanks again Jay for inviting me and I hope I will see you soon. Your faithfully, Vibha

Dear Jay,

I have received Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).letter, and
letter and
 I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 happy that you have invited me to over London(UK) to spend summer with you and your family. This is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 delighted offer and I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
. As I heard summer A determiner is probably missing here: "is the best".is the best
is best
 time to visit London as weather is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 and awesome.

Unfortunately I have my final exams in the next
 month and preparation is still
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.half-way
half way
. I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 this is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 exam for my For an academic degree, use "master’s".master’s
masters
 degree and couldn’t reschedule.

I would like to visit you and your family in spring season and I heard This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 things to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 and spend days in UK. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 ticket availability and plan in advance. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 hope your schedule will also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 and if any This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 or other plan you already have, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 inform me.

Thanks again Jay for inviting me and I hope I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
faithfully
,

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