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Faulty device formal letter

Faulty device formal letter NMwed

Dear sir, I am Ghalib hashem, I am one of your customers since 2000, I am writing this letter to report faulty Sony system that I purchased last Thursday. On Thursday, December 24, I bought Sony sound system with serial number 1232323 from your store; downtown branch, I have selected this brand after being nominated by one of your store staff, and according him this is latest version and has excellent review worldwide, but after switching it on 2 speakers is not working. I try to contact customer service for two consecutive days unfortunately there was no response, and this is another important issue need to be fixed. Im asking your immediate intervention regarding booth issues, also I am requesting to be refunded as soon as possible because I am not interested any more with this faulty item. I am looking forward to hear your immediate response today. Your faithfully, Ghalib h. abudohela

Dear sir,

I am Possible spelling mistake found.GoalieKhalidThaliaGlibGalibiGhazi
Ghalib
Possible spelling mistake found.Hashemhasheshashedhas hemhash em
hashem
, I am one of your customers since 2000, I am writing this letter to report faulty Sony system that I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 last Thursday.

On Did you mean to refer to the current year? December 24, 2021 is not a Thursday, but a Friday.
Thursday, December 24
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 Sony sound system with serial number 1232323 from your store; downtown branch, I have selected this brand after being nominated
 by one of your store staff, and It appears that a preposition is missing after 'according'.according to him
according him
 this is A determiner is probably missing here: "the latest".the latest
latest
 version and has excellent review worldwide, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 after switching it on 2 speakers is not working.

I try to contact customer service for two consecutive days unfortunately there was no response, and this is another This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 issue need to be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectified
fixed
.

Possible spelling mistake foundI'm
Im
 asking your immediate intervention regarding booth issues, also
 I am requesting to be refunded
 as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I am not interested Did you mean the adverb "anymore"?anymore
any more
 with this faulty item.

I am looking forward In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".to hearing
to hear
 your immediate response This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
faithfully
,

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Ghalib
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abudohela