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you have been working at a company for some time,but now you want to do some of your work at home. write a letter to your employer. in your letter. tell him what work you can do away from the office. let him know how many hours you need to work from home. and describe the benefits for you and your employer.

you have been working at a company for some time, but now you want to do some of your work at home. write a letter to your employer. in your letter. tell him what work you can do away from the office. let him know how many hours you need to work from home. and describe the benefits for you and your employer. GlLkg
Dear sir, My name is pooja kataria, I am working in your company in the IT department. I have been working for the last five years. I am writing this letter to request you to allow two days work from home in every week. I live on the north side and my office is located on the east side. I am taking 419 highway, There is going on construction works. They are making highway over there thus traffic must have to control. The construction is running for six months if I use the other way to come to the office, It takes around two hours. I do not want four hours of unwanted drive, that is really very stressful for me. If you allow me, Can I do my work at home for two days? I always communicate with my colleagues, and also through the internet I attend all my meetings. I will reply to all your questions. I have a request, please allow me to work from home. I can save my plethora of time. Hope you give me a positive reply. Thank you, your faithfully, pooja kataria.
Dear sir, My name is
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pooja
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kataria
, I am working in your
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company
in the IT department. I have been working for the last five years. I am writing this letter to request you to
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allow
two days
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
from home in every week.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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live
on the north side and my office
is located
on the east side.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am taking 419
Possible agreement error. The noun 'highway' seems to be countable, so consider using: "highways".
highway
, There is going on construction works. They are making highway over there
thus
traffic
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must
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have to
control. The construction is running for six months if I
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use
the other way to
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come
to the office, It takes around two hours. I do not want four hours of unwanted drive,
that is
really
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very
stressful for me. If you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me, Can I do my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
at home for two days? I always communicate with my colleagues, and
also
through the internet I attend all my meetings. I will reply to all your questions.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have a request,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
from home.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
can save my plethora of time. Hope you give me a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
reply. Thank you, your
faithfully
,
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pooja
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kataria
.

IELTS letter you have been working at a company for some time, but now you want to do some of your work at home. write a letter to your employer. in your letter. tell him what work you can do away from the office. let him know how many hours you need to work from home. and describe the benefits for you and your employer.

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  American English
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189 words
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