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Complain letter from Mushtariy

Complain letter from Mushtariy J0V9B
Namangan region, Mingbulak districtDate: July 20, 2021John Brown Namangan region, Mingbulak district, Sherdor restaurant Subject: about poor quality and tastless food. Dear Sir Brown, I came to your restaurant on 20th July and was really disappointed with the taste of the food is very sour and the place of to eat it messy. Your chefs should have known that too much salt is bad for people health and no one should eat such food. I was appalled at the poor quality and rude service. If you continue in this way you will lose customers. Which will cause your restaurant to be in crisis. I hope you will deal with this matter quickly fire cooks and waiters or organise classes to improve their skills and then the protests will end. You may contact me at +998997777777 if you want to ask me questions about incident. Your faithfullySignatureSobirjonova Mushtariy
Namangan
region,
Mingbulak
districtDate
: July 20, 2021John Brown
Namangan
region,
Mingbulak
district,
Sherdor
restaurant Subject: about poor quality and
tastless
food. Dear Sir Brown, I came to your restaurant on 20th July and was
really
disappointed with the taste of the food is
very
sour and the place of to eat it messy. Your chefs should have known that too much salt is
bad
for
people
health and no one should eat such food. I
was appalled
at the poor quality and rude service.
If
you continue in this way you will lose customers.
Which
will cause your restaurant to be in crisis. I hope you will deal with this matter
quickly
fire cooks and waiters or
organise
classes to
improve
their
skills
and then the protests will
end
. You may contact me at +998997777777 if you want to ask me questions about incident. Your
faithfullySignatureSobirjonova
Mushtariy
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IELTS letter Complain letter from Mushtariy

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
146 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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