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You were brought tasteless foods

You were brought tasteless foods LwLe3
Namangan, Mingbulak Sector-3 July 24, 2021Maryland Restaurant's manager Cambridge Restaurant near to Boston Subject-Tasteless foods Dear Sir/Madam Two days ago, I visited to your Restaurant and was actually disappointed with the taste of food that was brought to me. It is said that this place is one of the most famous one in Cambridge. To my dismay, my opinion about there is not satisfied and not available to your high level. You need to make sure that your staffs are preparing proper ways and not adding too much salt which are not one would expect from the Restaurant. Although I was engaged horrible flavors, I trust that you will not ignore about customers and also believe that you will deal with this type of complaint and such incidents will not happen. I look forward to your reply and if you have any question about the event, you may contact me at 93 496 80 02 Your faithfully David Thompson
Namangan
,
Mingbulak
Sector-3 July 24, 2021Maryland Restaurant's manager Cambridge Restaurant near to Boston Subject-Tasteless foods

Dear Sir/Madam Two days ago, I visited to your Restaurant and was actually disappointed with the taste of food that
was brought
to me.

It
is said
that this place is one of the most
famous
one in Cambridge. To my dismay, my opinion about there is not satisfied and not available to your high level. You need to
make
sure that your staffs are preparing proper ways and not adding too much salt which are not one would
expect
from the Restaurant.

Although I
was engaged
horrible flavors, I trust that you will not
ignore
about customers and
also
believe that you will deal with this type of complaint and such incidents will not happen.

I look forward to your reply and if you have any question about the
event
, you may contact me at 93 496 80 02

Your
faithfully
David Thompson
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