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Your neighbour keeps his/her animal in the garden. Write to him/her causes about it and the inconvenience it causes you and your family. In your letter -Say what the problem is -Explain why it causes inconvenience -Suggest a possible solution -Say what actions the need arises.

Your neighbour keeps his/her animal in the garden. Write to him/her causes about it and the inconvenience it causes you and your family. In your letter -Say what the problem is -Explain why it causes inconvenience -Suggest a possible solution -Say what actions the need arises. eKrQW
Dear Mr. Hilton, I this letter find you well. By this letter, I want to draw your attention to the uncomforting I am facing because of your habit of keeping your keeping your cat your garden. As since the past week I have perceived that your cat, "Millie" is roaming in your area which is inconvenient for my family. This cat is used to throw leftover fractions of food here and there; consequently, some of them fall into my premises. In fact, it adds on our waste and our maintenance work increases. Apart from it, I have two little children who are used to play in our garden, but, owing to this trash and as they are scared of your blue eyed animal, they cannot step out and play out door games. Therefore, I would like to request you to not to allow Millie to walk freely in the garden keep her always accompanied by someone. Moreover, it would be appreciated if you show some courtesy get cleaning done in my area. If appropriate actions are not taken regarding our sufferings then I may take some legal ways to get rid this issue. I solicit your co-operation. Yours Sincerely, Heely
Dear Mr. Hilton,

Did you mean "If" or is a comma missing ("I,")?
I
this letter find you well. By this letter, I want to draw your attention to the
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uncomforting
I am facing
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because
of your habit of
This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only "keeping your".
keeping your keeping your
cat your garden.

As since the past week I have perceived that your cat,
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
Millie
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
"
is roaming in your area which is inconvenient for my family. This cat is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to throw leftover fractions of food here and there;
consequently
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
of them fall into my premises. In fact, it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
adds
on our waste and our maintenance work increases. Apart from it, I have two
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
children who are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to play in our garden,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
, owing to this trash and as they
are scared
of your
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
blue eyed
animal, they cannot step out and play out door games.

Therefore
, I would like to request you
One 'to' seems to be obsolete.
to not to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
Millie to walk
freely
in the garden
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
her always accompanied by someone.
Moreover
, it would
be appreciated
if you
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show
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
Did you mean "courtesies"?
courtesy
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
cleaning done in my area. If appropriate actions are not taken regarding our sufferings then I may take
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
legal ways to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
rid this issue.

I solicit your co-operation.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Heely

IELTS letter Your neighbour keeps his/her animal in the garden. Write to him/her causes about it and the inconvenience it causes you and your family. In your letter -Say what the problem is -Explain why it causes inconvenience -Suggest a possible solution -Say what actions the need arises.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
199 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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