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You have been to a restaurant recently along with your friends restaurant was good and in order except the food. in your letter explain 1. what your friends like about the restaurant. 2.explain what was wrong with the food number 3 suggest what you want manager to do.

You have been to a restaurant recently along with your friends restaurant was good and in order except the food. in your letter explain 1. what your friends like about the restaurant. 2. explain what was wrong with the food number 3 suggest what you want manager to do. OrNky
Dear sirI am writing this letter to show my disappointment about the food your restaurant has served. My friends and I visited in your restaurant on Christmas Eve we were very pleased to see the atmosphere and the order of your restaurant it is very peaceful and enchanting all the decor and services worry delighting the sitting arrangement and the way a waiters are taking the order is very appreciable. Unfortunately when we ordered the food we were very e sad because we ordered we ordered the best dish of your restaurant that is fish sizzlers in this particular dash all the vegetables were not cooked well as well fish was very stinky the drinks we have ordered were not fresh. As your restaurant is very prestigious in the city I want to to bring your attention towards the food quality it should be maintained according to your status as people are paying here for the food. I hope you will take my advice in a positive way and try to to maintain the quality e of the eatables. Thanking youYours FaithfullyRobert
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has served. My friends and I visited in your
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on Christmas Eve we were
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the atmosphere and the order of your
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it is
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peaceful and enchanting all the decor and services worry delighting the sitting arrangement and the way
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are taking the order is
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appreciable. Unfortunately when we
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the best dish of your
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fish sizzlers in this particular dash all the vegetables were not cooked well
as well
fish was
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stinky the drinks we have
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were not fresh. As your
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is
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prestigious in the city I want
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quality it should
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according to your status as
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people
are paying here for the
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. I hope you will take my advice in a
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way and try
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maintain the quality e of the eatables. Thanking
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FaithfullyRobert
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IELTS letter You have been to a restaurant recently along with your friends restaurant was good and in order except the food. in your letter explain 1. what your friends like about the restaurant. 2. explain what was wrong with the food number 3 suggest what you want manager to do.

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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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