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Dear Ann I am writing to invinted you to attend the our family party.

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Dear Ann I'm writing to invinted you to attend the our family party. Party is on tuesday 7th of aprel. You can enjoy the party. Because I know, you love baloons. There are a lot of baloons. You like sweets, I know that, so, I and my mother will cook a big cake. I think it will be tasty. And we can dance. There are the best musics in the party. I invited Jenny, Sarah and John too. I think you will come to the party and enjoy it. Love Jessica
Dear Ann

I'm writing to
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invinted
you to attend
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the our family
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party
.
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Party
is on
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tuesday
7th of
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aprel
. You can enjoy the
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party
.
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Because
I know, you
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love
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baloons
. There are
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a lot of
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baloons
. You like sweets, I know that,
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so
, I and my mother will cook a
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big
cake. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
it will be tasty. And we can dance. There are the best musics in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
. I invited Jenny, Sarah and John too. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
you will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to the
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party
and enjoy it.

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Love
Jessica
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IELTS letter Dear Ann I am writing to invinted you to attend the our family party.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
90 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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