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Dear Ann
I'm writing to invinted you to attend the our family party. Party is on tuesday 7th of aprel. You can enjoy the party. Because I know, you love baloons. There are a lot of baloons. You like sweets, I know that, so, I and my mother will cook a big cake. I think it will be tasty. And we can dance. There are the best musics in the party. I invited Jenny, Sarah and John too. I think you will come to the party and enjoy it.
Love Jessica
Dear Ann
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Jessica
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IELTS letter Dear Ann I am writing to invinted you to attend the our family party.
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