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Write an e-mail to the secretary of the club. Write about your feelings and what you would like to do

Write an e-mail to the secretary of the club. Write about your feelings and what you would like to do OrN0d

Dear Sir / Madam I have just received an email from the club regarding postpone of our meeting(taking photos of historical buildings). So I’m writing this email to express my dissatisfaction with this change. I know we have to reschedule this meeting because a few of the buildings have been damaged in the last week’s storm. However, in the next 2 months I would back to the country with my family, so I can’t participate in this meeting. I really wanted to be in this meeting due to it gave me an opportunity to train and to improve my photographic skills. It would be grateful if you can change to another time or place. I think giving everyone in the club a survey would be good for you. I look forward to hearing back from you on if my recommendations are acceptable Yours faithfully, Tho

Dear Sir / Madam

I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 received an email from the club Probably a preposition is missing after 'regarding'.regarding to postpone
regarding postpone
 of our meeting(taking

photos of historical buildings). This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
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change
. I know we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 reschedule this meeting This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 a few of the buildings have been damaged
 in the last week’s storm. However
, in the next
 2 months I would back to the country with my family, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I can’t participate in this meeting.

I really
 wanted to be in this meeting due to it gave me an opportunity to train and to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 my photographic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
. It would be grateful if you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 to another time or place. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 giving everyone in the club a survey would be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for you.

I look forward to hearing back from you on if my recommendations are acceptable

Yours faithfully
,

Tho