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complaint letter service air company

complaint letter service air company Ba3GV
To department of complains I write you in order to complain about your services. I have just come back from a business trip from Canada. I chose your company for the such wide of facilities you provided which, I saw in an advertisement. Unfortunately neither of them were true. Firstly, As the flight was with delay I had to wait around 4 hours until I managed to check in and the flight could finally take off. Secondly, If the crew had been more polite, I would not have had an argument with one of them. I regret not asking for a complain form that employee, who refuse to change the film for other one newer. Definitely, I should have booked with Iberia airlines. Never have I had so uncomfortable journey. And on top of all, in spite of the fact that the advertisement is said to provide a wide range of food, The lunch, not only was fatty but also cold and nasty. Taking into account all of them, I would be grateful if you could give me part refund. I look forward to hearing from you. Your faithfully.
To department of
complains


I write you in order to complain about your services.

I have
just
come
back from a business trip from Canada.
I
chose your
company
for the such wide of facilities you provided which, I
saw
in an advertisement. Unfortunately neither of them were true.

Firstly
, As the flight was with delay I had to wait around 4 hours until I managed to
check
in and the flight could
finally
take off.

Secondly
, If the crew had been more polite, I would not have had an argument with one of them. I regret not asking for a
complain
form that employee, who refuse to
change
the film for other one newer.

Definitely, I should have booked with Iberia airlines. Never have I had
so
uncomfortable journey.

And on top of all,
in spite of
the fact that the advertisement
is said
to provide a wide range of food, The lunch, not
only
was fatty
but
also
cold
and nasty.

Taking into account all of them, I would be grateful if you could give me part refund.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Your
faithfully
.
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IELTS letter complaint letter service air company

Letter
  American English
10 paragraphs
189 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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