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Your neighbour have recently writing to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat.  Explain the reason for the noise  Apologise  Describe what action you will take

Your neighbour have recently writing to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat.  Explain the reason for the noise  Apologise  Describe what action you will take e51EV
Dear Sir/Madam, Thank you for your letter. I apologise for the noise that produces from my apartment which distress you and your family at night. Yesterday, my friends and their families gave me a surprise dinner party at my apartment. This surprise party was for celebration of my best performance and progression in my job work. My friends arrived at my home around 7. 00 pm and they stayed till late night. It was obviously unplanned dinner party that why most of the our time spent in to arranging the BBQ dinner and other things. However my friends brought the drums for music and wines to celebrate my day. My friends children and mine kids were playing drums which makes noise. I apologised for this, usually my parties always peacefull and finished at 7. 30 pm but it was surprise party which end at 1. 30 am. I assure you that you will not have any complain like this in future. Your sincerly, Sonia
Dear Sir/Madam,

Thank you for your letter. I
Possible spelling mistake. 'apologise' is British English.
apologise
for the noise that produces from my apartment which distress you and your family at night.

Yesterday, my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
and their families gave me a surprise dinner
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party
at my apartment. This surprise
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
was for celebration of my best performance and progression in my job work. My
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
arrived at my home around 7. 00 pm and they stayed till late night. It was
obviously
unplanned dinner
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
that why most of
A determiner cannot combine with a possessive pronoun. Did you mean simply "our time" or "the time"?
the our time
spent in to arranging the BBQ dinner and other things.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
However
my
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friends
brought the drums for music and wines to celebrate my day. My
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friends
children and mine kids were playing drums which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
noise.

I
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apologised
for this,
usually
my
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parties
always
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peacefull
and finished at 7. 30 pm
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but
it was surprise
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party
which
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end
at 1. 30 am. I assure you that you will not have any complain like this
Did you mean: "in the future"?
in future
.

Your
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sincerly
,

Sonia

IELTS letter Your neighbour have recently writing to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat.  Explain the reason for the noise  Apologise  Describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
163 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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