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Your neighbour have recently writing to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat.  Explain the reason for the noise  Apologise  Describe what action you will take

Your neighbour have recently writing to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat.  Explain the reason for the noise  Apologise  Describe what action you will take e51EV

Dear Sir/Madam, Thank you for your letter. I apologise for the noise that produces from my apartment which distress you and your family at night. Yesterday, my friends and their families gave me a surprise dinner party at my apartment. This surprise party was for celebration of my best performance and progression in my job work. My friends arrived at my home around 7. 00 pm and they stayed till late night. It was obviously unplanned dinner party that why most of the our time spent in to arranging the BBQ dinner and other things. However my friends brought the drums for music and wines to celebrate my day. My friends children and mine kids were playing drums which makes noise. I apologised for this, usually my parties always peacefull and finished at 7. 30 pm but it was surprise party which end at 1. 30 am. I assure you that you will not have any complain like this in future. Your sincerly, Sonia

Dear Sir/Madam,

Thank you for your letter. I Possible spelling mistake. 'apologise' is British English.apologize
apologise
 for the noise that produces from my apartment which distress you and your family at night.

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friends
 and their families gave me a surprise dinner You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 at my apartment. This surprise You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 was for celebration of my best performance and progression in my job work. My You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleagueacquaintancebuddyassociatecompanionroommate
friends
 arrived at my home around 7. 00 pm and they stayed till late night. It was obviously
 unplanned dinner You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 that why most of A determiner cannot combine with a possessive pronoun. Did you mean simply "our time" or "the time"?our timethe time
the our time
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However
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friends
 brought the drums for music and wines to celebrate my day. My You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleagueacquaintancebuddyassociatecompanionroommate
friends
 children and mine kids were playing drums which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 noise.

I Possible spelling mistake. 'apologised' is British English.apologized
apologised
 for this, usually
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parties
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peacefull
 and finished at 7. 30 pm This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it was surprise You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 at 1. 30 am. I assure you that you will not have any complain like this Did you mean: "in the future"?in the future
in future
.

Your Possible spelling mistake found.sincerely
sincerly
,

Sonia