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Your neighbor was drunk and fought you for no reason. Write a letter to Police Department to register a case against him. In your letter • introduce yourself • describe what happened • say what you want the officer to do

Your neighbor was drunk and fought you for no reason. Write a letter to Police Department to register a case against him. In your letter • introduce yourself • describe what happened • say what you want the officer to do xm8Jb
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Nikita, and I reside at L10 Green Apartment, Queen’s Street, Toronto, ON 1456. I am writing this letter to show my disappointment regarding my neighbour's misbehaviour after being drunk. Let me elaborate on the situation. Yesterday, I was parking my car in my garage. It was around 9: 00 P. M and thereafter, I was on my way towards my home. Suddenly, my neighbour Mohan who lives next to my place came and started following me. He was super sloshed and babbling, so I decided to avoid him and ran fast to reach my place. But he tried to catch me. He confronted me for no reason, I was alone and got so scared. For this reason, I would request you to log my complaint against the misbehaviour conducted by my neighbour. I am firm on my decision because he has no regrets, undoubtedly, such miscreants ought to be penalized. Enclosed is the camera footage for further investigation. Looking forward to hearing from you at the earliest. For any further, queries you can contact me on (91) 876541. Yours Faithfully, Nikita.
Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Nikita, and I reside at L10 Green Apartment, Queen’s Street, Toronto, ON 1456. I am writing this letter to
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show
my disappointment regarding my
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neighbour
's
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misbehaviour
after
being drunk
.

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Let
me elaborate on the situation. Yesterday, I was parking my car in my garage. It was around 9: 00 P. M and thereafter, I was on my way towards my home.
Suddenly
, my
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neighbour
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Mohan
who
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lives
next
to my place came and
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started
following me. He was super sloshed and babbling,
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so
I decided to avoid him and ran
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fast
to reach my place.
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But
he tried to catch me. He confronted me for no reason, I was alone and
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got
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so
scared.

For this reason
, I would request you to log my complaint against the
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misbehaviour
conducted by my
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neighbour
. I am firm on my decision
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because
he has no regrets,
undoubtedly
, such miscreants ought to
be penalized
. Enclosed is the camera footage for
further
investigation.

Looking forward to hearing from you at the earliest. For any
further
, queries you can contact me on (91) 876541.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Nikita.

IELTS letter Your neighbor was drunk and fought you for no reason. Write a letter to Police Department to register a case against him. In your letter • introduce yourself • describe what happened • say what you want the officer to do

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  American English
7 paragraphs
188 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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