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You are going on holiday to a city overseas where your friend lives. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter Write about your plans Request information where to stay Ask about the best places to visit

You are going on holiday to a city overseas where your friend lives. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter Write about your plans Request information where to stay Ask about the best places to visit OVR1d
Dear Sam, Hope you’re doing great. I’m just writing about my trip. I can’t tell you how excited I’m to be coming to Toronto City. I’ve booked flights and arrive in two weeks from now at 8pm on August 6, which Is a Saturday. I’ve not much organised at the moment apart from few places like city tower and Niagara Falls. I hope I’d rather go there first and explore more, with your help of course. As I’m from India and don’t have much knowledge about Toronto City, so it would be great if you give me a bit of insight about some places where I can stay and enjoy my holiday. I remember that it has been around 2 years when you moved to Canada, so you must have explored several famous areas. Therefore, I want you to recommend to me some exquisite sites to visit. Anyway, I will let you know when I get arrived and text me about the stuff that I’ve asked for. Catch you soon buddy. Best regards, Karam
Dear Sam,

Hope you’re doing great. I’m
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writing about my trip. I can’t
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you how excited I’m to be coming to Toronto City.

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I
’ve booked flights and arrive in two weeks from
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at 8pm on August 6, which Is a Saturday.
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I
’ve not much
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at the moment apart from few places like city tower and Niagara Falls.
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hope I’d
rather
go there
first
and explore more, with your
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help
of course
.

As I’m from India and don’t have much knowledge about Toronto City,
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it would be great if you give me a bit of insight about
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some
places where I can stay and enjoy my holiday.

I remember that it has been around 2 years when you
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moved
to Canada,
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so
you
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must
have explored several
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famous
areas.
Therefore
, I want you to recommend to me
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some
exquisite sites to visit.

Anyway, I will
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let
you know when I
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get
arrived and text me about the stuff that I’ve
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asked for
. Catch you
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soon
buddy.

Best regards,

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Karam
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IELTS letter You are going on holiday to a city overseas where your friend lives. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter Write about your plans Request information where to stay Ask about the best places to visit

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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