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You live in a house opposite a park. Every day a man brings large dogs to the park and lets them run free. Write a letter to your local council complaining about the danger. In your letter - say where the park is, - say how often this happens - give a description of the man and the dogs.

You live in a house opposite a park. Every day a man brings large dogs to the park and lets them run free. Write a letter to your local council complaining about the danger. In your letter - say where the park is, - say how often this happens - give a description of the man and the dogs. 6xaAl
Dear Councillor Smith, I am writing to you to see if you would be able to deal with a problem at the park across the street from where I live. I live on Ford Street and the park is Green Park. The problem is that every day, a young man brings two large Dobermans to the park and allows them to run free, off the leash. Obviously, this is a potential danger to other people who use the park. Although I have not seen the dogs cause any injuries, they frequently frighten children there and cause concern to their parents. I have contacted the police, but they have not taken action, despite the fact that signs clearly state that dogs must be kept on leads. The man appears to be in his late 20s, average height and well built. He usually wears a black leather jacket and blue jeans. His dogs are about a meter high, black and brown and well-groomed. I hope that you will be able to take care of this matter. Yours sincerely, John Jones
Dear Councillor Smith,

I am writing to you to
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on Ford Street and the
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is Green Park.

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brings two large Dobermans to the
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park
and
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them to run free, off the leash.
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, this is a potential
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danger
to other
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who
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the
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. Although I have not
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seen
the dogs cause any injuries, they
frequently
frighten children there and cause concern to their parents. I have contacted the police,
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they have not taken action, despite the fact that signs
clearly
state that dogs
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on leads.

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appears to be in his late 20s, average height and
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well built
. He
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wears a black leather jacket and blue jeans. His dogs are about a meter high, black and brown and well-groomed.

I hope that you will be able to take care of this matter.

Yours
sincerely
,

John Jones
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IELTS letter You live in a house opposite a park. Every day a man brings large dogs to the park and lets them run free. Write a letter to your local council complaining about the danger. In your letter - say where the park is, - say how often this happens - give a description of the man and the dogs.

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