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Your local college is organizing an event on International Student’s Day. Write a letter to the organizer and say: • What topics would you like them to cover? • Why would it be interesting for students? • Ask questions about the arrangement

Your local college is organizing an event on International Student’s Day. Write a letter to the organizer and say: • What topics would you like them to cover? • Why would it be interesting for students? • Ask questions about the arrangement 15Adn
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter regards to the event going to be held on next Monday, 15th April 2021 on International Student’s Day. I have a suggestion that if you can ask international students to speak about issues and difficulties, which they faced while registering for our college and the value they give to this struggle. This would be more interesting to know how much other people value our country’s college and will be good for our local learners, so they can understand, how much regards our college has internationally and how other countries’ people are struggling to get admission here. This will be surely a pride moment for us. One of my friends from South Asia also wants to participate in this event and share some details about his culture and norms. Kindly arrange the projector along with a sound system for his presentation, as he wants to show some pictures and videos of their lifestyle. Yours faithfully Vishal
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter regards to the
event
going to
be held
on
next
Monday, 15th April 2021
on International Student’s Day.

I have a suggestion that if you can ask international students to speak about issues and difficulties, which they faced while registering for our college and the value they give to this struggle.

This would be more interesting to know how much other
people
value our country’s college and will be
good
for our local learners,
so
they can understand, how much regards our college has
internationally
and how other countries’
people
are struggling to
get
admission here. This will be
surely
a pride moment for us.

One of my friends from South Asia
also
wants to participate in this
event
and share
some
details
about his culture and norms. Kindly arrange the projector along with a sound system for his presentation, as he wants to
show
some
pictures and videos of their lifestyle.

Yours
faithfully


Vishal
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IELTS letter Your local college is organizing an event on International Student’s Day. Write a letter to the organizer and say: • What topics would you like them to cover? • Why would it be interesting for students? • Ask questions about the arrangement

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
161 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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