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Write a letter to your friend regarding a few things need to bring from your home

Write a letter to your friend regarding a few things need to bring from your home jRVqL

I hope this letter finds you well. I am so glad that you are coming to Vancouver next week, as it seems ages since we last saw each other. I actually have a favour to ask you hope you don't mind. The fact that i need few things from my home and i would be extremely grateful if you could being along with your luggage. I believe you are customer-service Manager of tech mobile store in Burnaby city, and so I am writing to complain about a smart mobile which i bought from your store on 10th March 2015. Although I followed corrective actions in the user manual, still I find an issue with the mobile back camera as I could not capture any picture, which means it is not fit our purpose. I have sent multiple emails and tried to connect with the service team over the phone but nobody could take ownership of my issue. Would you kindly reply in the mail by writing return confirmation of full refund money and collection of my mobile with anticipating dates. Newspaper: Dear Editor, I am writing this letter to let you know the cancellation of current year football competition and we are extremely sad to inform to our public through your new paper. The fact that the current financial status is not so good and we do have some unavoidable factors which made us cancel the football matches. on the other hand, there are many of youngsters who actively looking for the event and hope we will plan for next year.

I hope this letter finds you well. I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 glad that you are coming to Vancouver next
 week, as it seems ages since we last This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 each other.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 actually have a Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.favor
favour
 to ask you hope you don't mind. The fact that Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 need few things from my home and Did you mean "I"?I
i
 would be extremely
 grateful if you could being along with your luggage.

I believe you are customer-service Manager of tech mobile store in Possible spelling mistake found.Barnaby
Burnaby
 city, and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I am writing to complain about a smart mobile which Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 from your store on 10th March 2015.

Although I followed corrective actions in the user manual, still
 I find an issue with the mobile back camera as I could not capture any picture, which means it is not fit our purpose.

I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 multiple emails and tried to connect with the service team over the phone This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 nobody could take ownership of my issue.

Would you kindly reply in the mail by writing return confirmation of full refund money and collection of my mobile with anticipating dates.

Newspaper:

Dear Editor,

I am writing this letter to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know the cancellation of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 year football Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).competition, and
competition and
 we are extremely
 sad to inform to our public through your new paper.

The fact that the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 financial status is not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).good, and
good and
 we do have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 unavoidable factors which made us cancel the football matches.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOn
on
 the other hand, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 of youngsters who actively
 looking for the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 and hope we will plan for next
 year. 