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A reporter complained about a new TV program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. – Describe your point of view. – Say what you like about the show and why. – Ask the newspaper to take some action.

A reporter complained about a new TV program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. – Describe your point of view. – Say what you like about the show and why. – Ask the newspaper to take some action. gVpD
Dear Mr jay, I am writing this letter to bring to your notice regarding a recent article published in your newspaper, where the reporter has complained about the language used on the Big Boss show which broadcasts on Colors TV. I firmly believe that many points mentioned in the articles are baseless and certainly required a fair opinion before publishing. The article emphasized on the foul language used in the show. However, please be informed that this is a reality show and all the views and comments are personal of the participants in the show and the channel or the show runner has no involvement. In fact, this is the best part I like about the show as there are certain celebrities whom we follow and admire based on their fictional work but because of this show their true identity and personality is revealed. I agree that every one has the right to have an opinion, but I also believe that the basis for that opinion has to be validated and this becomes most important if your opinion will be read by millions of people. I hope you take appropriate action against the reporter and check for the evidences for the comments mentioned in the report. Hoping for a right action. Yours Sincerely, Damin
Dear Mr jay,

I am writing this letter to bring to your notice regarding a recent article published in your newspaper, where the reporter has complained about the language
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which broadcasts on Colors TV.

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firmly
believe that
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points mentioned in the articles are baseless and
certainly
required a
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fair
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opinion
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before
publishing. The article emphasized on the foul language
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used
in the
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show
.
However
,
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please
be informed
that this is a reality
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show
and all the views and comments are personal of the participants in the
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show
and the channel or the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
show
runner has no involvement. In fact, this is the best part I like about the
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show
as there are certain celebrities whom we follow and admire based on their fictional work
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but
because of this
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show
their true identity and personality
is revealed
.

I
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agree
that every one has the right to have an
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opinion
,
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but
I
also
believe that the basis for that
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opinion
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has to
be validated
and this becomes most
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important
if your
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opinion
will
be read
by millions of
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people
. I hope you take appropriate action against the reporter and
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check
for the evidences for the comments mentioned in the report.

Hoping for a right action.

Yours
Sincerely
,

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IELTS letter A reporter complained about a new TV program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. – Describe your point of view. – Say what you like about the show and why. – Ask the newspaper to take some action.

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