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Your Manager has asked you to do a presentation at the upcoming training session. Write a letter to your manager and say – What is the topic of presentation? – What is the benefit of conducting a session on that topic? – What are your requirements for conducting this presentation?

Your Manager has asked you to do a presentation at the upcoming training session. Write a letter to your manager and say – What is the topic of presentation? – What is the benefit of conducting a session on that topic? – What are your requirements for conducting this presentation? YO5K
Dear Mr. Jackie, I am writing to inform you about the details of the presentation that you asked me to prepare for our team at that upcoming training. I decided to make a presentation on the “Mainframe Modernization” demo session which will be held on 01-April-2021 at over Discover office, Riverwoods, Chicago. The target audience for the session will be the developers having the exposure to mainframe legacy platform and should have an intermediate level of knowledge in cloud operations. The primary advantage of this demo would be for the employee will able to grab the knowledge on how the integration made from a legacy platform to modern development tools and this is one of most wanted goal needs to be accomplished on the fiscal year 2021-2022 for our client. I would recommend sending the nominations for each application team coder who feels that this session will be helpful for them. I would appreciate if you can get touch with each applications teams lead, and provide me with the list of the developer by next week Friday. Please free feel to contact me in case of any questions. Yours sincerely, Chockalingam
Dear Mr. Jackie,

I am writing to inform you about the
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details
of the presentation that you asked me to prepare for our team at that upcoming training.

I decided to
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make
a presentation on the “Mainframe Modernization” demo session which will
be held
on 01-April-2021 at over Discover office,
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Riverwoods
, Chicago.

The target audience for the session will be the developers having the exposure to mainframe legacy platform and should have an intermediate level of knowledge in cloud operations. The primary advantage of this demo would be for the employee
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will able
to grab the knowledge on how the integration made from a legacy platform to modern development tools and this is one of most wanted goal needs to
be accomplished
on the fiscal year 2021-2022 for our client.

I would recommend sending the nominations for each application team coder who feels that this session will be helpful for them. I would appreciate if you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
touch with each applications teams lead, and provide me with the list of the developer by
next
week Friday.

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Please
free feel to contact me in case of any questions.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Chockalingam
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IELTS letter Your Manager has asked you to do a presentation at the upcoming training session. Write a letter to your manager and say – What is the topic of presentation? – What is the benefit of conducting a session on that topic? – What are your requirements for conducting this presentation?

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190 words
6.0
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