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You just spend a week with a friend on holiday. when you got home, you realised you left your wallet there. write a letter to your friend. in your letter. thank your friend for holiday explain that your wallet in your house give them instructions of how to send it back to you.

You just spend a week with a friend on holiday. when you got home, you realised you left your wallet there. write a letter to your friend. in your letter. thank your friend for holiday explain that your wallet in your house give them instructions of how to send it back to you. Jjg5
Dear John, I hope you and your family doing well. Firstly, I would like say thanks from very bottom of my heart for lovely days that I spend with you and your family. It was unforgetable time for me because we spend plenty of time together after long while. John, when I reached my home, I found that my wallet is missing after huge stress I remind myself that I kept wallet in drawer that is near to kitchen. I was totally forgot to pick it up from there. Wallet and money is not that much important for me however, driving license and health card is quite crucial as you know I cannot drive without my driving card. It will take 30 days to make a new driving license. Moreover, I have an appointment with doctor in coming week so, I need my health card too otherwise, I have to pay full heath examination fee to doctor. I need a favour from you John. Could you send me wallet through speed mail or courier. I will transfer courier charges to you. There is one more alternative that one of my friend from office living nearby your house. He can pick up wallet that will be good for both of us. Next summer make a schedule to spend some time with my family. I hope you will be think about it Warm regard, Jason
Dear John,

I hope you and your family doing well.
Firstly
, I would like say thanks from
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very
bottom of my heart for lovely days that I spend with you and your family. It was
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unforgetable
time for me
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because
we spend
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plenty
of time together after long while.

John, when I reached my home, I found that my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wallet
is missing after huge
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stress
I remind myself that I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
kept
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wallet
in drawer
that is
near to kitchen. I was
totally
Consider using a past participle here: "forgotten".
forgot
to pick it up from there.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Wallet
and money is not that much
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
for me
however
, driving license and health card is quite crucial as you know I cannot drive without my driving card. It will take 30 days to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a new driving license.
Moreover
, I have an appointment with doctor in coming week
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
, I need my health card too
otherwise
, I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
pay full heath examination fee to doctor.

I need a
Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.
favour
from you John. Could you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wallet
through speed mail or courier. I will transfer courier charges to you. There is one more alternative that one of my friend from office living nearby your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
. He can pick up
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wallet
that will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
for both of us.

Next
summer
Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: "makes".
make
a schedule to spend
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
time with my family. I hope you will be
Consider using a past participle here: "thought".
think
about it

Warm regard,

Jason
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IELTS letter You just spend a week with a friend on holiday. when you got home, you realised you left your wallet there. write a letter to your friend. in your letter. thank your friend for holiday explain that your wallet in your house give them instructions of how to send it back to you.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
232 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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