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Every year, someone in the company where you work is chosen as best employee. your manager has asked staff member to make suggestions about who should be chosen this year. identify explainwhat job of this colleague involves give reasons why

Every year, someone in the company where you work is chosen as best employee. your manager has asked staff member to make suggestions about who should be chosen this year. identify explainwhat job of this colleague involves give reasons why OO9M

Dear John I hope you and your family doing well. Firstly, I want to congrats you for achievement of targets two month before. As everyone know about its time to select the best employee of this year. I am writing this letter to give some suggestions for best employee of year award. Here I want to recommend name of Miss lily. Although all employees of company are doing their best but she is crazy for obtaining goals of corporate. She is head of marketing management. She has full knowledge of marketing due to her guidence and knowledge, we are able to fulfill our objective in advance. I do not know you notice her doing extra work after working hours but I saw her many time specially day before launching of new product. She is not only hard work employee but also most understandable emlpoyee of this company. Although, she is working at high position in company but she respect all other employees. I never saw her to abusing others. Moreover, she is motivator for others. As per my concern she is deserve best employee of year prize. I will appreciate if you will pay attention on my suggestion. Your faithfuly, Jason

Dear John

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 of year prize.

I will appreciate if you will pay attention on my suggestion.

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,

Jason