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You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and Give your reason for writing Tell about your education Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job.

You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and Give your reason for writing Tell about your education Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job. 9XVp
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to apply for the job of Quality Assurance Manager that has been posted on the university's notice board. I am an active student of the Loren Brusque University and pursuing Business Administration. I am in last year of the program and ready to start my career. I have 3 years of work experience as Sotware Test Engineer in one of the US company. My previous company name is miMeetings which works in transportation domain. I feel certain with the experience I have earned from my past job and knowledge earned from education makes me perfect candidate for the job. Moreover, I am certified ISTQB test planner which gives me extra edge. I have attached my detailed CV along with this letter so that you can get brief history of my academic and professional life. I will be looking forward to a positive reply from your side Your faithfully, Charles
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to apply for the job of Quality Assurance Manager that has
been posted
on the university's notice board.

I am an active student of the Loren Brusque University and pursuing Business Administration.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am in last year of the program and ready to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
my career.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have 3 years of work experience as
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Sotware
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Test
Engineer in one of the US
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company
. My previous
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company
name is
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miMeetings
which works in transportation domain. I feel certain with the experience I have earned from my past job and knowledge earned from education
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
me perfect candidate for the job.
Moreover
, I
am certified
ISTQB
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
test
planner which gives me extra edge. I have attached my detailed CV along with this letter
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so
that you can
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get
brief history of my academic and professional life.

I will be looking forward to a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
reply from your side

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
faithfully
,

Charles

IELTS letter You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and Give your reason for writing Tell about your education Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job.

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