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You recently visited a local restaurant and had a very good meal. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper. In your letter • explain where the restaurant is • describe what you ate in the restaurant • say why you would recommend the restaurant to other

You recently visited a local restaurant and had a very good meal. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper. In your letter • explain where the restaurant is • describe what you ate in the restaurant • say why you would recommend the restaurant to other gPBd
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a fan of your informative editorial and articles which I try to read as often as I can. I also like to share and exchange local information with my fellow residents of this town on different forums, such as your newspaper. And, as a part of this information sharing effort, I would like to talk about a restaurant, where I visited recently with my family members, which I think is worth visiting. We tried several meals at that restaurant, and I must say that they were of top quality because they all seemed to be made with fresh ingredients. I especially liked their “mushroom fettuccine”, made with some perfectly-grinded, hot pepper flakes and evenly cut mushrooms. The French fries served there were also very delicious and chewy. Besides, I also liked the nice sitting arrangement there in front of their spacious porch, which was nicely decorated with different kinds of flower plants. As for the customer service there, I think that the staff at the restaurant knew perfectly well how to make their customer happy. So, based on these findings, I would certainly recommend this restaurant to anybody and hope that you would publish an article reviewing and recommending this restaurant to your readers. Yours faithfully, George Malone
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a fan of your informative editorial and articles which I try to read as
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often
as I can. I
also
like to share and exchange local information with my fellow residents of this town on
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different
forums, such as your newspaper. And, as a part of this information sharing effort, I would like to talk about a
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restaurant
, where I visited recently with my family members, which I
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think
is worth visiting.

We tried several meals at that
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restaurant
, and I
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must
say that they were of top quality
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because
they all seemed to
be made
with fresh ingredients. I
especially
liked their “mushroom fettuccine”, made with
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some
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perfectly-grinded
, hot pepper flakes and
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cut
mushrooms. The French fries served there were
also
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very
delicious and chewy.
Besides
, I
also
liked the nice sitting arrangement there in front of their spacious porch, which was
nicely
decorated with
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different
kinds of flower plants. As for the customer service there, I
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think
that the staff at the
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restaurant
knew
perfectly
well how to
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make
their customer happy.

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So
, based on these findings, I would
certainly
recommend this
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restaurant
to anybody and hope that you would publish an article reviewing and recommending this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
to your readers.

Yours
faithfully
,

George Malone
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IELTS letter You recently visited a local restaurant and had a very good meal. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper. In your letter • explain where the restaurant is • describe what you ate in the restaurant • say why you would recommend the restaurant to other

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  American English
6 paragraphs
213 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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