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You recently visited a local restaurant and had a very good meal. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper. In your letter • explain where the restaurant is • describe what you ate in the restaurant • say why you would recommend the restaurant to other

You recently visited a local restaurant and had a very good meal. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper. In your letter • explain where the restaurant is • describe what you ate in the restaurant • say why you would recommend the restaurant to other BXRp
Dear Sir/Madam, I am Vasav residing in Banjara Hills, Hyderabad. I am writing to share my experiences with the “Orange Chilli” restaurant near my house. I would want you to publish it in your “Sense and Dine” column on Sundays so that it would be beneficial for others. I visited the restaurant last weekend with my friend who had just returned from Japan. We wanted to have some good food. So I took him to the “Orange Chilli”. It is situated at the top of a small hill, and the surroundings are picturesque. The dining hall was spacious, with very hospitable staff. We ordered fried rice, paneer chilli dry, papad paratha and chilli potato. The service was quick. The food was delicious, so we ate much more than we usually would. The restaurant also offered a corporate discount. My friend was pleased about the lunch and praised me for taking him to such a good restaurant. I have shared my experience with you so that other people in Banjara hills might get to know that there is an excellent outlet in their community. Thanks in advance. Yours sincerely Vasav
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am
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Vasav
residing in
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Banjara
Hills, Hyderabad. I am writing to share my experiences with the “Orange
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Chilli
” restaurant near my
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house
.
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I
would want you to publish it in your “Sense and Dine” column on Sundays
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so
that it would be beneficial for others.

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I
visited the restaurant last weekend with my friend who had
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just
returned from Japan. We wanted to have
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some
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good
food.
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So
I took him to the “Orange
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Chilli
”. It
is situated
at the top of a
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small
hill, and the surroundings are picturesque. The dining hall was spacious, with
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very
hospitable staff.

We ordered fried rice,
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paneer
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chilli
dry,
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papad
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paratha
and
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chilli
potato. The service was quick. The food was delicious,
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so
we ate much more than we
usually
would.
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The
restaurant
also
offered a corporate discount. My friend was
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pleased
about the lunch and praised me for taking him to such a
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good
restaurant.

I have shared my experience with you
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so
that other
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people
in
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Banjara
hills might
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get
to know that there is an excellent outlet in their community.

Thanks in advance.

Yours
sincerely
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Vasav
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IELTS letter You recently visited a local restaurant and had a very good meal. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper. In your letter • explain where the restaurant is • describe what you ate in the restaurant • say why you would recommend the restaurant to other

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  American English
7 paragraphs
188 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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