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Your manager asked you to work at the reception desk while the receptionist is getting lunch. This involves answering telephones and helping clients who come in. However, you are unable to help out because you have other work. Apologize. Explain why you don’t have time to help out. Suggest a way to solve the problem.

Your manager asked you to work at the reception desk while the receptionist is getting lunch. This involves answering telephones and helping clients who come in. However, you are unable to help out because you have other work. Apologize. Explain why you don’t have time to help out. Suggest a way to solve the problem. YLYbQ
Dear Manager, I am extremely sorry for the yesterday as you assigned me the duties for having look on the front desk. But, I could not make it. As you know, our sales are on the peak therefore every hot item just disappear in couples of minutes. on that moment, I was replenishing the item over the floor. when, I relished that I had finished the shelving and I can help on the front. Right on that occasion, one of customer drop the chemical on the floor. That s why, I can not leave the floor like this way because it was an issue which is related to the health and safety and it can put me into trouble. that so, I preferred to cleaning the floor on the any other task. Generally speaking, This thing become a big pain for all of us. Every time, when we have a somebody less on the store we would have a these kinds of difficulties. in my suggestion, we will start to look one more person. it will really decrease the pressure on all of us. Also, we can look on some new technologies. like as, kiosk it will response most of the consumer question and it would make a lots of expense down and increment the profit in overall. I try my best from the next time please understand the situation and forgive me.
Dear Manager,

I am
extremely
sorry for the yesterday as you assigned me the duties for having look on the front desk.
But
, I could not
make
it.

As you know, our sales are on the peak
therefore
every hot item
just
disappear in couples of minutes.
on
that moment, I was replenishing the item over the
floor
.
when
, I relished that I had finished the shelving and I can
help
on the front. Right on that occasion, one of customer drop the chemical on the
floor
. That s why, I can not
leave
the
floor
like this way
because
it was an issue which
is related
to the health and safety and it can put me into trouble.
that
so
, I preferred to cleaning the
floor
on the any other task.

Generally
speaking, This thing become a
big
pain for all of us. Every time, when we have a somebody less on the store we would have a these kinds of difficulties.
in
my suggestion, we will
start
to look one more person.
it
will
really
decrease the pressure on all of us.
Also
, we can look on
some
new technologies.
like
as, kiosk it will
response
most of the consumer question and it would
make
a lots
of expense down and increment the profit in
overall
.

I try my best from the
next
time
please
understand the situation and forgive me.
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IELTS letter Your manager asked you to work at the reception desk while the receptionist is getting lunch. This involves answering telephones and helping clients who come in. However, you are unable to help out because you have other work. Apologize. Explain why you don’t have time to help out. Suggest a way to solve the problem.

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