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You recently read an advertisement about the equipment that you bought a few days ago. However, the information in the advertisement was wrong. Write a letter to the manufacturer and say – What was the advertisement you read? – What information was wrong? – What should the manufacturer do about this problem?

You recently read an advertisement about the equipment that you bought a few days ago. However, the information in the advertisement was wrong. Write a letter to the manufacturer and say – What was the advertisement you read? – What information was wrong? – What should the manufacturer do about this problem? NrGYj

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about your advertisement that I’ve read in the daily newspaper. As I bought a wing mirror for my car a few days ago. I have been a loyal customer for many years. There was a topic in your guarantee that makes me extremely anxious. My friend and I came to your store and I bought one wing mirror two weeks ago. Since as your assistant told me which brand has warranty two years but at the moment read your advertisement and I am shocked. As it was written two months. I would like to see this advertisement and you should reform it. I am sure you must have received other complaints from concerned people and I hope that you will take an action soon about this disturbing issue. I look forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Xioa bujino

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to complain about your advertisement that I’ve read in the daily newspaper. As I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 a wing mirror for my car a few days ago. I have been a loyal customer for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 years.

There was a topic in your guarantee that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 me extremely
 anxious. My friend and I came to your store and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 one wing mirror two weeks ago. Since as your assistant This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 me which brand has Use past participle here: "warrantied".warrantied
warranty
 two years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 at the moment read your advertisement and I am shocked
. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 it was written
 two months.

I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 this advertisement and you should reform it. I am sure you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 have received other complaints from concerned This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 and I hope that you will take an action This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 about this disturbing issue. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 look forward to your response.

Yours faithfully
,

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Xioa
Possible spelling mistake found.buyingbusingBuninbunionFujiko
bujino