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Please write an email to claim for insurance

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to request an insurance claim for my luggage which I lost while travelling on holiday last week. The luggage is Samsonite brand in red colour, 23 inches in size. In addition, it also covered with grey luggage bag cover. Moreover, the condition of the luggage is new as I bought it merely a few days before my trip. However, sadly that I did not manage to put any luggage tag on it. While I suspect that my luggage was lost at the luggage collection area after the flight landed. It seems that another passenger might mistakenly take my luggage at the baggage area. Meanwhile, I have tried to contact the airline but they are still unable to figure out the reason of my lost item. Based on the purchased insurance plan from your company, I have checked the insurance terms and conditions and found out lost luggage is covered. Kindly find attached my purchased insurance plan and appreciate it if you could help to reimburse the maximum value of my lost item. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Sophie
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to request an
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insurance
claim for my
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luggage
which I
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lost
while travelling on holiday last week.

The
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luggage
is Samsonite brand in red
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colour
,
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23 inches
in size.
In addition
, it
also
covered with
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grey
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luggage
bag cover.
Moreover
, the condition of the
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luggage
is new as I
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bought
it
merely
a few days
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before
my trip.
However
,
sadly
that I did not manage to put any
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luggage
tag on it.

While I suspect that my
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luggage
was
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lost
at the
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luggage
collection area after the flight landed. It seems that another passenger might
mistakenly
take my
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luggage
at the baggage area. Meanwhile, I have tried to contact the airline
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but
they are
still
unable to figure out the reason of my
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lost
item.

Based on the
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purchased
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insurance
plan from your
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company
, I have
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checked
the
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insurance
terms and conditions and found out
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lost
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luggage
is covered
. Kindly find attached my
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purchased
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insurance
plan and appreciate it if you could
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help
to reimburse the maximum value of my
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lost
item.

Hope to hear from you
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soon
.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Sophie
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IELTS letter Please write an email to claim for insurance

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  American English
8 paragraphs
185 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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