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You recently bought an item in the supermarket but later found out that something was wrong with it. You came back to the superstore, but the staff was not helpful. Write a letter to the supermarket manager and say :

You recently bought an item in the supermarket but later found out that something was wrong with it. You came back to the superstore, but the staff was not helpful. Write a letter to the supermarket manager and say: LrKOK
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to you regarding my purchase of grilled cheese melt from your Tim Hortons. when I reached home then I realized that the cheese was undercooked and the other stuffing smells very bad. Every time, I bought the same things so your staff even remember my order even though when I reached them they did not attend me well. As I am your regular customer and did not expect these kinds of irresponsibleness from your staff. Because this is one of the biggest superstores of the city and I think you are fully aware of the health and safety rules of the Ontario Government. It was difficult to take a single bite of sandwiches so, I throw them all in the garbage bin. The bill is attached with this letter which is for $50 and I want a full refund from your side. Hope you can consider my complaint and explain to me well why this has happened, and I hope this will not happen in the future. I hope you would take this matter your consideration. Hope to see a better response from your staff. Yours sincerely, Amanpreet Kaur
Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to you regarding my
purchase
of grilled cheese melt from your Tim Hortons.
when
I reached home then I realized that the cheese was
undercooked
and the other stuffing smells
very
bad
. Every time, I
bought
the same things
so
your staff even remember my order
even though
when I reached them they did not attend me well. As I am your regular customer and did not
expect
these kinds of
irresponsibleness
from your staff.
Because
this is one of the biggest superstores of the city and I
think
you are
fully
aware of the health and safety
rules
of the Ontario
Government
.

It was difficult to take a single bite of sandwiches
so
, I throw them all in the garbage bin. The bill
is attached
with this letter which is for $50 and I want a full refund from your side. Hope you can consider my complaint and
explain
to me well why this has happened, and I hope this will not happen in the future. I hope you would take this matter your consideration.

Hope to
see
a better response from your staff.

Yours
sincerely
,

Amanpreet
Kaur
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IELTS letter You recently bought an item in the supermarket but later found out that something was wrong with it. You came back to the superstore, but the staff was not helpful. Write a letter to the supermarket manager and say:

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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