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Write a letter to a friend who worked at your previous company. You have moved to a new job in a new city. describe your city describe your job describe the arrangements for him to visit you

Write a letter to a friend who worked at your previous company. You have moved to a new job in a new city. describe your city describe your job describe the arrangements for him to visit you 2bJpk
Hey Kim, I just finished the big move and I wanted to let you know how it all went. So far San Fran has been an upgrade on L. A. . Might be just the honeymoon period but the public transport and layout of the streets here make a big difference. Beyond that, SF is everything you’ve heard – nice community feel, very gentrified, lots of hills, haha. My new work hasn’t been as great off the jump. I started at my new design company this last week and I’m having trouble with my new boss. The other co-workers are cool but my immediate manager won’t give me the time of day. Maybe because I’m new or I did something to get on her bad side. I hope it’ll pass because my first assignments have been boring and basic – not what I was looking for when I applied here. Anyway, really looking forward to seeing you on the weekend! Give me a ring when your flight gets in and I can either pick you up at the airport or I’ll leave a spare key with my neighbor (Apartment 7. 05) and tell him to be on the lookout for you. There’s a guest bedroom so you can sleep there. See you soon! Regards, Dave
Hey Kim,

I
just
finished the
big
move
and I wanted to
let
you know how it all went.
So
far San Fran has been an upgrade on L. A.
.
Might be
just
the honeymoon period
but
the public transport and layout of the streets here
make
a
big
difference. Beyond that, SF is everything you’ve heard
nice community feel,
very
gentrified, lots of hills, haha.

My
new
work hasn’t been as great off the jump. I
started
at my
new
design
company
this last week and I’m having trouble with my
new
boss. The other co-workers are cool
but
my immediate manager won’t give me the time of day. Maybe
because
I’m
new
or I did something to
get
on her
bad
side. I hope it’ll pass
because
my
first
assignments have been boring and basic
not what I was looking for when I applied here. Anyway,
really
looking forward to seeing you on the weekend! Give me a ring when your flight
gets
in and I can either pick you up at the airport or I’ll
leave
a spare key with my neighbor (Apartment 7. 05) and
tell
him to be on the lookout for you. There’s a guest bedroom
so
you can sleep there.

See
you
soon
!

Regards,

Dave
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend who worked at your previous company. You have moved to a new job in a new city. describe your city describe your job describe the arrangements for him to visit you

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
214 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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