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Your friend recently came to your birthday party and bought you an expensive present. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • thank your friend • explain how useful the present is • arrange to meet up with your friend sometime soon

Your friend recently came to your birthday party and bought you an expensive present. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • thank your friend • explain how useful the present is • arrange to meet up with your friend sometime soon qVKXr
Dear Reetika, Greetings, I hope this letter finds you well and happy. I am writing this letter to thank you from the bottom of my heart. I was over the moon when you came to my birthday party. All of my work friends still talk about you. As well as, I really don’t have sufficient words to thanks you for such a wonderful watch you gave me. I was planning to buy the exact model. As it is a crucial part of my weight training program and I can monitor my vitals all the time. These days we rarely get to meet each other anymore, due to such busy work schedules. As you said that you moved close my house recently. I think we should go somewhere, I have a lot of stories to share with you. Lets plan a dinner for next Sunday if it is suitable according to your timetable. Please let me know if you can manage, Can’t wait to see you soon. Warm Regards Rishi
Dear
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Reetika
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Greetings, I hope this letter finds you well and happy. I am writing this letter to thank you from the bottom of my heart. I was over the moon when you came to my birthday party. All of my work friends
still
talk about you.

As well
as, I
really
don’t have sufficient words
Did you mean "to thank"?
to thanks
you for such a wonderful
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
you gave me. I was planning to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
the exact model. As it is a crucial part of my weight training program and I can monitor my vitals all the time.

These days we rarely
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get
to
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meet
each other anymore, due to such busy work schedules.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
you said that you
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moved
close my
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house
recently. I
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think
we should go somewhere, I have
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a lot of
stories to share with you.
Did you mean "Let's" (let's = let us; lets = 3rd person singular of 'let')?
Lets
plan a dinner for
next
Sunday if it is suitable according to your timetable.

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Please
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let
me know if you can manage, Can’t wait to
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see
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Warm Regards

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Rishi

IELTS letter Your friend recently came to your birthday party and bought you an expensive present. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • thank your friend • explain how useful the present is • arrange to meet up with your friend sometime soon

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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