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Leave application to the boss for 10 days.

Leave application to the boss for 10 days. kY91d

Respected Sir, Greeting for the day! I plan family trip in summer vacation every year. Schools will be close from next week. As our budget meeting postpone for a month, till budget get approved we will have less workload. Hence, I'm planning to go summer vacation with my family this year as well for ten days. I'm giving assurance to that, work will be suffer in my absence. I will be available on phone and through email. Request you to grant the permission for my 10 days long leave. your faithfullyJagdish Vankar

Respected Sir,

Greeting for the day!

I plan family trip in summer vacation every year. Schools will be close from next
 week. As our budget meeting postpone for a month, till budget This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 approved we will have less workload. Hence
, I'm planning to go summer vacation with my family this year as well
 for ten days. I'm giving assurance to that, work will be Consider using the past participle "suffered"?suffered
suffer
 in my absence. I will be available on phone and through email.

Request you to grant the permission for my 10 days long This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
.

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faithfullyJagdish
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Vankar

IELTS letter Leave application to the boss for 10 days.

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American English

5 paragraphs

91 words

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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

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Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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