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Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community. Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter

Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community. Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter d5lVr
Dear Sir/Madam, After having seen your advertisement in the newspaper regarding rewards for people, I would really appreciate the step you have taken to reward people for their actions and activities. I would like to suggest one of my known good friend Gopi because he is a social worker, he is spending seventy percent of his earnings for the good cause like feeding the poor, serving food for the people who are in old-age homes, taking care of orphanage people by providing books and stationery items to the children, conducting an event on social causes like environmental issues. Example planting trees, swatch Barath (a program that will make few activists gather and clean certain areas covered up with dust and garbage), etc. If you could help in providing an amount so that it would be helpful not of for him for the society as well. Even though the reward which he receives, I believe he uses it for the social cause than for individual usage. I would deeply appreciate it if you could reward Gopi Yours Faithfully, Saikiran
Dear Sir/Madam,

After having
seen
your advertisement in the newspaper regarding
rewards
for
people
, I would
really
appreciate the step you have taken to
reward
people
for their actions and activities.

I would like to suggest one of my known
good
friend
Gopi
because
he is a social worker, he is spending seventy percent of his earnings for the
good
cause like feeding the poor, serving food for the
people
who are in
old
-age homes, taking care of orphanage
people
by providing books and stationery items to the children, conducting an
event
on social causes like environmental issues. Example planting trees, swatch
Barath
(a program that will
make
few activists gather and clean certain areas covered up with dust and garbage), etc.

If you could
help
in providing an amount
so
that it would be helpful not of for him for the society
as well
.
Even though
the
reward
which he receives, I believe he
uses
it for the social cause than for individual usage.

I would
deeply
appreciate it if you could
reward
Gopi


Yours
Faithfully
,

Saikiran
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IELTS letter Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community. Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter

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  American English
7 paragraphs
177 words
5.5
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