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STUDYING SCHOOL OVERSEAS

STUDYING SCHOOL OVERSEAS 95wmr

Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Kristine Lanorias, 31 years of age and is currently residing in Singapore. I pass the recent entrance exam held last march 20, 2021 and I’m planning to study English at school overseas. As a new applicant from the university, I would like to know where is the school exactly located and do they offer scholarship for students with passing rate of 90%. In addition, I would like to know some of the profound information’s about the courses they offer. I am more interested in taking up Bachelors of Science Degree in Nursing at the university. Also, can you give me some information’s regarding the kind of accommodations available for new students like me. By the way, I prefer to stay with a female student who has the same course as me and just nearby the school campus itself. Additional request, I’m allergic to seafoods, if possible to serve me either chicken or pork during lunch breaks. Thanks &

Dear Sir/Madam,

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, 31 years of age and is currently
 residing in Singapore. I pass the recent entrance exam held last The month "March" needs to be capitalized.March
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 and I’m planning to study English at school overseas. As a new applicant from the university, I would like to know where is the school exactly located and do they offer scholarship for students with passing rate of 90%.

In addition
, I would like to know If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
 profound information’s about the courses they offer. I am more interested in taking up Bachelors of Science Degree in Nursing at the university. Also
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some
 information’s regarding the kind of accommodations available for new students like me. By the way, I prefer to stay with a female student who has the same course as me and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 nearby the school campus itself. Additional request, I’m allergic to seafoods, if possible to serve me either chicken or pork during lunch breaks.

Thanks &