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my informal letter to my close friend

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Hello Jane, How are you? I hope you and your family are well. How is your life? I’m very glad to hear from you about that you’re coming to my village to see my village. By the way, you heard about fresh air of my homeland. It’s nature is pure. the fresh air of my motherland is really clean because of beautiful atmosphere. I promise you to cook for you our national meals such as manti, palov, sumalak. By visiting my countryside, you will find out our national holidays and traditions that are celebrated in spring when anything is being reformed again. After you will come here, you can swim with me in the river. it is enjoyable to walk through its beaches. Then, we shall go to a plethora of our historical museums in order to introduce you with my country’s great history. You will see some sightseeing places which are situated in my district. We will go to schools where English is taught. Make sure you write soon. With the best wishes Lucy.
Hello Jane,

How are you? I hope you and your family are well. How is your life? I’m
very
glad to hear from you about that you’re coming to my village to
see
my village. By the way, you heard about fresh air of my homeland.
It’s
nature is pure.
the
fresh air of my motherland is
really clean
because
of
beautiful
atmosphere. I promise you to cook for you our national meals such as
manti
,
palov
,
sumalak
. By visiting my countryside, you will find out our national holidays and traditions that
are celebrated
in spring when anything is
being reformed
again. After you will
come
here, you can swim with me in the river.
it
is enjoyable to walk through its beaches. Then, we shall go to a plethora of our historical museums in order to introduce you with my country’s great history. You will
see
some
sightseeing places which
are situated
in my district. We will go to schools where English
is taught
.
Make
sure you write
soon
.

With the best wishes

Lucy.
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IELTS letter my informal letter to my close friend

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
175 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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