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Write an email to the volunteer in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things - Explain why you want to volunteer. - State what your skills and experience. - Indicate where you would like to volunteer and how long.

Write an email to the volunteer in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things - Explain why you want to volunteer. - State what your skills and experience. - Indicate where you would like to volunteer and how long. RkRwk
Dear Sir/Madam, The purpose of my writing you today to express you about my interest in the voluntary job that you recently posted in your website. I want to go at ABC university to pursue my higher education in Social service. Thus, to get register in this University, I need to build tremendous resume by doing some impressive voluntary work. Furthermore, I need this job for the sake of humanity. For instance, a recent survey done by University of Manitoba and has shown that 60% of developing countries are suffering because they lack social workers who guides them in a time of need. On top of that, I assisted the famous social worker Lisa Robes for 6 months in south Africa to protect the vulnerable people from post earthquake effects and can-do various emergency tasks like cooking, making tents. In addition, I am also Certified in First aid and CPR level C. With all things considered, I have an interest to serve the residents of India for next 6 months. This is because, recent floods hit the Indian population so badly that they need our help. Nonetheless, it will give me an opportunity to learn and grow as well. Please find attached my resume with this email. Furthermore, am open line of communication from your side in this case, would be great help. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Regards, Sheenam
Dear Sir/Madam,

The purpose of my writing you
today
to express you about my interest in the voluntary job that you recently posted in your website.

I want to go at ABC university to pursue my higher education in Social service.
Thus
, to
get
register in this University, I need to build tremendous resume by doing
some
impressive voluntary work.
Furthermore
, I need this job for the sake of humanity.
For instance
, a recent survey done by University of Manitoba and has shown that 60% of
developing countries
are suffering
because
they lack social workers who
guides
them in a time of need.

On top of that
, I assisted the
famous
social worker Lisa Robes for 6 months in
south Africa
to protect the vulnerable
people
from post earthquake effects and can-do various emergency tasks like cooking, making tents.
In addition
, I am
also
Certified in
First
aid and CPR level C.

With all things considered, I have an interest to serve the residents of India for
next
6 months. This is
because
, recent floods hit the Indian population
so
badly
that they need our
help
. Nonetheless, it will give me an opportunity to learn and grow
as well
.

Please
find attached my resume with this email.
Furthermore
, am open line of communication from your side
in this case
, would be great
help
.

I am looking forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Regards,

Sheenam
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IELTS letter Write an email to the volunteer in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things - Explain why you want to volunteer. - State what your skills and experience. - Indicate where you would like to volunteer and how long.

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
233 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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