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Your colleague is travelling from another country by plane for a meeting. You have arranged the airport pick up Hotel accommodation and planned his meetings. Write a letter to your colleague in your letter saying when and where you will meet him, explain where he will stay, tell him about the other instruments you made.

Your colleague is travelling from another country by plane for a meeting. You have arranged the airport pick up Hotel accommodation and planned his meetings. Write a letter to your colleague in your letter saying when and where you will meet him, explain where he will stay, tell him about the other instruments you made. RkRWP
I am writing this letter to inform you about the arrangements I made for you while staying our country. You will be glad to know that I will pick you from the airport when you arrive. I have already communicated with an airport official to confirm your arrival time and he has assured me that the flight you are coming by will hit the airport at 7 o'clock in the morning. I will be waiting for you in the terminal no-7 wearing a blue suit that will help you to recognise me. As per your requirement I have booked a single bedroom for your accommodation in a five star hotel adjacent to our office which would be convenient for you to attend in the meeting. Besides, the hotel is renowned for their hospitality, customer service and cleanliness that would be prepared by you and they also provide free wi-fi service for the hotel guest, which would be great for your communication. However, I have also arranged for a outdoor trip for you to see the historical places and some attractive tourist destinations to know our country better before returning to your country and after finishing your scheduled meetings. Waiting to see you soon. Truly yours, Khondoker Sazzad Hossain
I am writing this letter to inform you about the arrangements I made for you while staying our country. You will be glad to know that I will pick you from the airport when you arrive. I have already communicated with an airport official to confirm your arrival
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time and
he has assured me that the flight you are coming by will hit the airport at 7 o'clock in the morning. I will be waiting for you in the terminal no-7 wearing a blue suit that will
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help
you to
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recognise
me.

As per your requirement I have booked a single bedroom for your accommodation in a
'five star' is missing a hyphen.
five star
hotel adjacent to our office which would be convenient for you to attend in the meeting.
Besides
, the hotel
is renowned
for their hospitality, customer service and cleanliness that would
be prepared
by you and they
also
provide free
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wi-fi
service for the hotel guest, which would be great for your communication.

However
, I have
also
arranged for
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a
outdoor trip for you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
the historical places and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
attractive tourist destinations to know our country better
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
returning to your country and after finishing your scheduled meetings.

Waiting to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Truly
yours,

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Khondoker
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Sazzad
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Hossain
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IELTS letter Your colleague is travelling from another country by plane for a meeting. You have arranged the airport pick up Hotel accommodation and planned his meetings. Write a letter to your colleague in your letter saying when and where you will meet him, explain where he will stay, tell him about the other instruments you made.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
207 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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