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your local newspaper published an advertisement asking people to help with environment peojects in your area describe a local environment issue that affects you explain what you would like to do to help and suggest how problem could be avoided in future

your local newspaper published an advertisement asking people to help with environment peojects in your area describe a local environment issue that affects you explain what you would like to do to help and suggest how problem could be avoided in future 1rRA

Dear Editor, I am citizen of Toronto named Jason. I am so pleased when I saw an advertisement in your newspaper that you want to start a project to clean the surrounding of city and I am really appreciate to you for this project that will help to improve the health of society. I am writing this letter to let you know that I want to take part in this project. As you know, people are facing the problem of garbage although, government set up trash- bins everywhere but some naughty individual throw the plastic bottle and cans along with roads. Consequently, it look very dirty. I would like to offer my hands for this project as I am always available on weekend. I will make a team with my other friends from company and we will collects recyclable things from outskirts of city. I want to suggest you that cleaning is not only the solution of this issue. you need to create more awareness among people by using different mode of networking. Apart from this youngster will come forward for these types of projects if you will be able to motivate them. looking forward for positive response Yours faithfully, Jason

Dear Editor,

I am citizen of Toronto named Jason. I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfied
pleased
 when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 an advertisement in your newspaper that you want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskdealbusinessenterprisestrategyjob
project
 to clean the surrounding of Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).city, and
city and
 I am really
Consider using a past participle here: "appreciated".appreciated
appreciate
 to you for this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskdealbusinessenterprisestrategyjob
project
 that will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 the health of society. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am writing this letter to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know that I want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :participate
take part
 in this project.

As you know, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are facing the problem of garbage although, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 set up trash- bins everywhere This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 naughty individual throw the plastic bottle and cans along with roads. Consequently
, it Did you mean "looks"?looks
look
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 dirty.

I would like to offer my hands for this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskdealbusinessenterprisestrategyjob
project
 as I am always available on weekend. I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a team with my other friends from Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).company, and
company and
 we will The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "collect"collect
collects
 recyclable things from outskirts of city.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 want to suggest you that cleaning is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 the solution of this issue. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterYou
you
 need to create more awareness among This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 by using This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 mode of networking. Apart from this youngster will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 forward for these types of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskdealbusinessenterprisestrategyjob
projects
 if you will be able to motivate them.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterLooking
looking
 forward for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 response

Yours faithfully
,

Jason