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your local newspaper published an advertisement asking people to help with environment peojects in your area describe a local environment issue that affects you explain what you would like to do to help and suggest how problem could be avoided in future

your local newspaper published an advertisement asking people to help with environment peojects in your area describe a local environment issue that affects you explain what you would like to do to help and suggest how problem could be avoided in future 1rRA
Dear Editor, I am citizen of Toronto named Jason. I am so pleased when I saw an advertisement in your newspaper that you want to start a project to clean the surrounding of city and I am really appreciate to you for this project that will help to improve the health of society. I am writing this letter to let you know that I want to take part in this project. As you know, people are facing the problem of garbage although, government set up trash- bins everywhere but some naughty individual throw the plastic bottle and cans along with roads. Consequently, it look very dirty. I would like to offer my hands for this project as I am always available on weekend. I will make a team with my other friends from company and we will collects recyclable things from outskirts of city. I want to suggest you that cleaning is not only the solution of this issue. you need to create more awareness among people by using different mode of networking. Apart from this youngster will come forward for these types of projects if you will be able to motivate them. looking forward for positive response Yours faithfully, Jason
Dear Editor,

I am citizen of Toronto named Jason. I am
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so
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pleased
when I
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saw
an advertisement in your newspaper that you want to
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start
a
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project
to clean the surrounding of
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city and
I am
really
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appreciate
to you for this
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project
that will
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help
to
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improve
the health of society.
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I
am writing this letter to
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let
you know that I want to
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take part
in this project.

As you know,
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people
are facing the problem of garbage although,
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government
set up trash- bins everywhere
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but
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some
naughty individual throw the plastic bottle and cans along with roads.
Consequently
, it
Did you mean "looks"?
look
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very
dirty.

I would like to offer my hands for this
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project
as I am always available on weekend. I will
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make
a team with my other friends from
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company and
we will
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "collect"
collects
recyclable things from outskirts of city.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
want to suggest you that cleaning is not
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only
the solution of this issue.
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you
need to create more awareness among
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people
by using
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different
mode of networking. Apart from this youngster will
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come
forward for these types of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
projects
if you will be able to motivate them.

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looking
forward for
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positive
response

Yours
faithfully
,

Jason
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IELTS letter your local newspaper published an advertisement asking people to help with environment peojects in your area describe a local environment issue that affects you explain what you would like to do to help and suggest how problem could be avoided in future

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
200 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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