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You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Thank your friend for the holiday • Explain that you left your wallet in their house • Give them instruction of how to send it back to you

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Thank your friend for the holiday • Explain that you left your wallet in their house • Give them instruction of how to send it back to you kDnN
Dear jubayer, I hope this letter will find you well. Last week it was really great and it turns out to be one of the best moments in my life. Thank you for arranging that holiday trip. I reached my house last night and I realized that I had left my wallet in your home. As you know I was in a hurry to catch my flight and due to that I didn’t check my belongings properly. Now I remembered that I left my wallet on the night stand in the guest room. I have few ID proofs such as my driving license and membership cards in my wallet. Currently, I’m not able to drive without my driving license and I can’t attend any club meetings. So, those documents in my wallet are very important for me. If you don’t mind, please send me the wallet by courier. You can use my office address along with my contact details for sending it to me. ¬ Thanks for your help and I hope we catch up very soon. Regards, Mehidi Hasan Sagor
Dear
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jubayer
,

I hope this letter will find you well. Last week it was
really
great and it turns out to be one of the best moments in my life. Thank you for arranging that holiday trip. I reached my
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house
last night and I realized that I had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wallet
in your home.

As you know I was in a hurry to catch my flight and due to that I didn’t
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
my belongings
properly
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
I remembered that I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wallet
on the night stand in the guest room. I have few ID proofs such as my driving license and membership cards in my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wallet
.
Currently
, I’m not able to drive without my driving license and I can’t attend any club meetings.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, those documents in my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wallet
are
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very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
for me.

If you don’t mind,
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please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wallet
by courier. You can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
my office address along with my contact
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
for sending it to me.

¬

Thanks for your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
and I hope we catch up
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very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Regards,

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Mehidi
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Hasan
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Sagor

IELTS letter You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Thank your friend for the holiday • Explain that you left your wallet in their house • Give them instruction of how to send it back to you

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  American English
7 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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